Tuesday, July 12, 2011
Less Worth(y)
I don't know why this question never stuck out to me before. Worth. Everything's been written about at some point. There's really nothing new. What isn't worth writing about? That's seems to be a smaller question. Maybe the only answer is: what you had for breakfast.
Unless you write a bowl of cereal better than anyone else.
Monday, May 9, 2011
Why, Where, For Whom- A Partial Literacy Narrative
Cassandra Rose Blaise DeMarco
Wednesday, April 27, 2011
The Quest for the Right Write
Cassandra DeMarco
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4/27/11
What is Happening to Writing?
The Quest for the Right Write
In a way, writing can be seen as a deteriorating art, decaying at the hands of poor syntax, horrendous grammar, and “lol”s. However, in terms of comprehension and organization, there is a definite move toward progress. Verboseness is generally frowned upon and concision is the goal in most writings. A reader wants to get to a point with as little difficulty as possible, with important ideas highlighted, and unnecessary platitudes kicked out of the equation. The culture of the 21st century America is that of speed. Fast and to the extreme has become the new “American way” and if that means that writing must change to accommodate the culture, so be it. But how does writing do so, or, how has it? The genesis of the written language was a response to the desire to record important data: inventories, genealogies, events. As the scope of writing grew, however, stories were written. Emotion and humanity began to be placed into what was once a medium of mere information. This gave life to fiction writing and the use of writing as a medium of persuasion, and a written language of proper sentence structure and formatting was born separate from the language of speech and thought. Writing had rules and sequence. Respect was given to writers that knew and respected said customs; it showed education. However, these rules are merely constructs of tradition, and not natural or particularly conducive to the comprehension of the reader. Moving now to the present, the digital age has offered an entirely new venue from the book, or codex, or scroll. While computerized word processors may just be the electronic translation of such forms, web pages are an entirely new language, and the nature of writing and what it should be is brought into question more than ever, and addressed in a variety of novel ways.
Our class has looked through an incredibly wide scope at what is being said, yelled, shown, and written about writing. Essays, news articles, performance pieces, lectures, and the writings of peers have opened up the possibilities of what writing can do and the effect that it can have. It has also shown that there is a great deal of writing about writing. This sort of meta-writing proves the consistent impact which writing has on society. An example of this includes the poem “the Problem of Describing Trees” by Robert Hass. In his poem, he comments on the use of metaphor and the power that a writer has when the reader is in the grips of the text. He writes on the actions of a particular tree, using metaphor and personification. At a certain point however, he begins to have difficulty with this. He continues: “And the tree danced. No. / The tree capitalized. / No. There are limits to saying, / In language, what the tree did. / It is good sometimes for poetry to disenchant us.” (Hass) This technique of addressing his writing within the writing itself is an out-of-body experience for the reader, holding a mirror up to the poem and noticing the truths it contains. This commentary shows that writers are not just thinking about what they should write now, but what can be written, and the style and innovations that writers are becoming more fearless in employing. Hass is a good example of one who is aggressive in his review of what poetry can do. The commonly held idea is for poetry to enchant, specifically. However, Hass realizes the limitations of words, and for a poet to reflect on what words cannot do as opposed to what they can is a pioneering effort in the modern explorations of writing.
Moving along the lines of poetry but venturing into the spoken word forum, Taylor Mali is a teacher/performer with a passion for the power of words and speech. His performance of his poem “Like You Know” on Def Poetry is a testament to the virtues of speaking and writing with authority. (Mali) While it is certainly a written poem, the presentation style of it is not through text but through voice. In fact, when read off of a page, it has little of the impact it is destined to and loses much of the meaning. This is a reminders that writing is not only meant to be read, and never was, and the popularization and resurgence of slam poetry shows how powerful writing can be out loud and shared through the writer’s actual voice. The sentences can be fragmented and choppy, and it offers more strength to the words and the message without discrediting the poet as uneducated in proper syntax.
Jay David Bolter’s book Writing Space: Computers, Hypertext, and the Remediation of Print is a foray into the digital age that we are now living in. in working through Chapter 3: Hypertext and the Remediation of Print, it became apparent that writing is nowhere near as stagnant as many have assumed. The constant reworking of ideas and mediums gives writing the distinction of a living medium. It is working hand in hand with science and experience to find ways to make writing more accessible to the average individual. Jay David Bolter describes Hypertext as thus: “phrases in a webpage can be “hot”: clicking on them will bring up a new page. One page can be linked electronically to many others.” (27) This hypertext is a way of digital indexing that serves to make the landscape of the internet easier to navigate. Often, however, it can start a chain of distraction, opening page upon page of new information branching in all different directions instead on offering a plain, to-the-point page of information. While this might be distracting, it is conducive to knowledge retention and understanding in a way that the physical text on paper is not. It allows for instant definition of words or phrases that one might not be familiar with and breaks up the linear form of most perceptions of writing.
After the presentation we gave on Chapter 3, our peers went to their blogs - online forums for writing and thought - to respond to the chapter and ask some unanswered questions about writing through the scope of this medium. One such peer, Alex Breen, asked: “If hypertext is more akin to human thought, how might that change the linguistic habits of future cultures?” I believe that what is important to keep in mind is that we do not speak in the same way that we write unless we are reading something written or forcing it unnaturally. The way that our brains are wired is hypertextual. We speak and digress into other thoughts and fragment our sentences and backtrack to the initial point much the way we might do on a web page. But this linguistic formula has always been this way. Speaking in full sentences and paragraphs without creating a sort of vocal hypertextual web is only practical in terms of rehearsed speech. Most modern playwrights have realized that the linguistics of the English language as spoken differ vastly from the English language as written. Writers such as David Mamet have begun writing in the way that people think and speak, and it is more natural sounding to an audience than long blocks of thought without pause, retracing, repetition or defining. So, the new hypertextual landscape of writing should have no effect on the linguistics of our culture, present or future, but, in fact, mirror it more accurately.
Another colleague, Daniel O’Connor, in his blog, asks two questions about the potential of distraction that hypertext poses: “Can Hypertext worsen an argument by linking to an irrelevant piece of writing?” and “Along with Hypertext is there the risk that the reader continues to go from page to page and never returns to finish the original?” these are important questions. As impressively adept as the human mind is at establishing connections and finding meaning, it is also known for difficulties in focus. On a personal level, hypertext has distracted me almost in equal parts to the good it has done me. If the first question it is being asked from the perspective of the writer, then hypertext absolutely can weaken an argument. If a writer attempts to make an argument and does not know how to effectively manipulate the writing space which they inhabit, i.e., a web page, it is wholly possible that poor use of hypertext can devalue or dilute an argument. That is the same as using any tool, however: if the user does not have adequate understanding of or skill with the device, it works against him. Hypertext is not something that all writers should shove into their otherwise linear and meaningful texts: it is not a mandatory tool for internet writings. However, if the writer can weave it into his or her piece without adding confusion or distancing the reader from the true meaning, hypertext does its job. Much like writing itself, there is certainly an artistry involved in the shaping and formatting of an online text, not unlike any other text, but with more possible tools and higher risks of failing.
To answer Dan’s second question: the human mind, again, is prone to distraction. A writing form with such spontaneity and possibility also has its drawbacks in the context of the limitations of us as people. There are surely innovations to still be made, and hypertext is not a perfect creature, but from where we are technologically, these problems of focus fit snuggly into the discourse.
In conclusion, the time we live in is a fortunate one in the sense that we are living during a technological revolution. The way that we see the world is altered daily by new advancements and technologies instead of reading a magazine to find out about what is going on in, say, the theatre world. I can now read articles online sent directly to me through an RSS feed. Information is constantly coming at us from all sides and the scary thing is when we are overloaded, will we know? What is happening to writing is that it now needs to shout louder to reach us over all the white-noise written words we receive. It needs new organization and research to find the most appropriate formatting for our thinking patterns. It’s not so linear; it lives in fragments. What’s happening with writing is a revolution of time, speed, and form, and it doesn’t look like there will be an end anytime soon.
Works Cited
Breen, Alexander. Summareponse to Chapter 3 presentation. Breenbrain. 25 April, 2011. Web. 26 April, 2011.
Bolter, J. David. Writing Space: Computers, Hypertext, and the Remediation of Print. Mahwah, NJ: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, 2001. Print.
Hass, Robert. The Problem of Describing Trees. 2005.
Like you Know. By Taylor Mali. Perf. Taylor Mali. 2003.
O’Conner, Daniel. Ch. 3 Hypertext and The Remediation of Print. DOC’s Blog. 26 April, 2011. Web. 26 April, 2011
Monday, April 25, 2011
Presentation Reflection
Watch our Prezi at: http://prezi.com/ltd96tjbiajm/hypertext/
I am going to categorize this presentation as a success! Mostly! I mean, I am relatively content with the way we presented our piece and the points we got across. I do think that we offered a coherent explanation of the chapter. However, structurally, I wish we could have been on more solid ground together. I enjoy giving oral presentations, and enjoy them more when I feel fully prepared for them and what they will entail.
For my part, I was happy with the video that I chose and the screenshots from eBay and Wikipedia. I also felt comfortable with explaining my points when Dr. Lay asked questions. What I wish didn't happen was the typos, because of my self-diagnosed spelling obsession. I'm very irritated by typos…
If we had more time, we could have had a more cohesive presentation and worked together more. But considering we absolutely didn't, I can't complain as much as I usually would. A plus side to this was that when each of us brought up points, they were open to disagreement within the group and we had a positive response when ideas clashed. I was happy with it!
Friday, April 15, 2011
Chapter 6 refashioned dialogues
Gorgeous layout
Don't understand the first video
The font sometimes was difficult for me specifically to read because of my eyesight, but is probably fine for the general reading population!
I can excuse typos in personal writing, but when quoting I don't think it's acceptable. There were at least two.
1) why is Bolter using music as a metaphor? Hips he a musician?
2) what was the point of the music video?
3) Is reading right to left not considered reading in sequence?
4) Is there a way to write which could interpret meaning in itself? For example, using formatting, italics, bold,underlines, size and color.
5) should speaking and writing exist in two separate realms? Speaking being linear and writing not so?
6) How do anti-writers format books in non-
Linear formats when confined to paper? Is it possible?
Monday, April 11, 2011
iRealize-your-limitations-pad
Upload files onto blackboard
Save files in .docx, or .doc.
Stream music on www.stereomood.com (it keeps repeating the same songggggg!!)
Work on a prezi
Play anything that uses Flash.
I guess it's just what naturally happens in all relationships. You fall in love with the ideal form. The winsome smile and the curled eyelashes. Little do you realize she has nine cats and they're all named... "Cat".
But I digress, I feel like I have been cheating on my laptop, quite frankly, for a light and cheaper lady-friend in the iPad.
That said, I have to start appreciating the iPad for the incredible piece of technology that it is and not expect it to be a computer, because it isn't. Heck, I can't even spell-check on blogger with it...*
*it should be noted, for irony's sake, that when I first typed that last sentence, I mistyped spell-check as "spellcheak" which, coincidentally, would have been easier to catch if I had spell check.
Okay, cowboys. Have a Marvelous Monday, or at the very least, a manic one. For the Bangles' sake.
Signed,
Cassandra Rose Blaise DeMarco
I Think I Crayon, I Think I Crayon
2) Truthfully there isn't anything interesting or novel about this piece. I've been staring at it for quite some time trying to find something.
3) [see blackboard]
4) As these crayon assignments were done at the beginning of the semester, it is completely understandable that the space wasn't used to its fullest potential as a blank page. We've been indoctrinated to view "blank pages" as lined paper, to follow the standards expected of us in relation to format and spacing. This piece does well to prove that. (as did mine, for that matter)
Hey, thanks for reading, kiddies. Have a day of many splendors and food court vendors!
Signed,
Cassandra Rose Blaise DeMarco
Wednesday, March 30, 2011
Eyes closed, CAN'T FOCUS.
When I was younger I was known for my ability to be eloquan and express ideas in a way that was relatively sophisticat for my age. WhenI graduated eigth grade I was asked to give the speech for my graduating class and . Scratch that. When I was in seventh grade I ran for class president andnwas allowed to give really incredible speeches to the school in order to become elected. I wasyoungerthan the other candidates, and although it was a compendium. I don't remember where I was but I plan to continue somewhere.... The speech for eigth grade gaduationjs abetted story anyway. Actually, no, when I was a sophomore in high school I ran for and won preside t of my government class. We had a limit on our speech to 2 mi utes and my teacher did not make me stop speaking even after 7 minutes until I was done because he enjoyed my speech so much and thought it was so mature and eloquent t. The end. Not the end, moral of the story, I used to want to be a speech writer for the president or for some other political figure. The real end. Clearly I am not nearly as eloquent S before...
Sincerely, Cassie DeMarco.
Monday, March 28, 2011
Chaptah 2, woo-hoo-hoo
In Chapter 2 of Writing Space, Jay David Bolter takes a look at the technology of writing. This he does not limit to computers and typewriters, but expands to include writing itself. He says "Ancient and modern writing are technologies in the sense that they are methods for arranging verbal ideas in a visual space." by this he means that the earliest forns of writing are as much technologies as the most modern forms, because they are innovations to put down thought in a way that is not inherently natural or assumed. Later he goes on to say how the act of writing and reading changes the way we think into the forms of literature. We think in sentences if we are literate, he says, and this separates the educated from the uneducated. Of the literate, he says "They speak, as they write, in a variety of styles and levels [...] They write in their mind as well as on paper or at a keyboard; indeed, they are writing whenever they think or verbalize in that methodical way characterized by writing." the technology of writing has changed the way that out minds process and relay information.
Signed,
Cassandra Rose Blaise DeMarco
Stitch Bitch Ink Shedding
Sunday, March 27, 2011
Like, ya know?
I would like to thank Taylor Mali for making a point to remind us to speak like we know, instead of speaking, like, ya know?
Taylor Mali's performance poem "Like You Know" as performed on Def Poetry is an effective piece about speaking with authority. A fan of his took the audio of the performance and made a video of the text being shown as it is said. The actual video of the performance shows Mali moving about the stage and illustrating his points with hand gestures. Watching him perform it brings it to life while the text depersonalizes it. It seems to just be the idea of the human contact we have when we watch him actually do it, as opposed to the barrier brought up by the text. In a lot of ways, it reminds me of closed captioning, which a lot of people do not like because it distracts them from the performance. I found the text distracting.
Take it to the Limit! (Of Language)
In Robert Hass's poem "The Problem of Describing Trees", the comfort of poetry as a guaranteed enchantress is pulled from us. In describing a view of a tree and its motions, he reaches a standstill in terms of what he can describe the tree doing. He says "And the tree danced. No. The tree capitalized. No. There are limits to saying, In language, what the tree did. It is good sometimes for poetry to disenchant us." In doing this, he pulls us out of the safety of his description of tree. The first "no" comes at us rather quickly, and jarringly, but then it seems to go back to the description. But, with the second "no" all hope of the enchantment is gone, and he drops the bomb "There are limits to saying, In language, what the tree did." and although we all know that there are some things that there are simply no sufficient words for, it is not common to be told that within a poem itself. Hass does something admirable in this poem, I believe, in bringing it to our attention that sometimes what is happening can't be described, even by one whose profession it is to describe. Although disenchanting, to say the least, Hass performs the important task of writing poetry that actually says something, and has a message.
Imagine All These Images
responses to sample essay
Friday, March 18, 2011
Shelley, You are whack, son.
When I was younger and thought that I was really edgy and insightful I would write things like Stitch Bitch: The Patchwork Girl, by Shelly Jackson. But I certainly wouldn't publish them... This text is a strange philosophical venture into the idea of writing in hyperspace... I think.
Truthfully I had trouble following with the throughline. Basically, Shelley offers up several propositions as the sections of her piece. Examples include "BOUNDARY PLAY We don't think what we think we think." "AGAINST HISTORY It was not how they said it was." she goes on and on in Confusing circles about how nothing is as we believe and we must think of things as different or non existent or opposite. You know, the things that any basic eighth grader who thinks she is an existentialist or Nihilist because she doesn't know the difference or what either even means would just eat right up. Questioning beliefs! Undoing the dogmatic structures of thought! But now as a college student 5 years after eighth grade really I can't make sense of this piece of writing and I am just frustrated. Maybe I was smarter then. Or maybe this article is senseless. Probably the former, and I am looking forward to talking about this and figuring out what she actually meant in class today.
Tuesday, March 15, 2011
This is only a test
I'm testing out blogging from Microsoft office instead of inside my blog itself… let's see if it works?
Friday, March 11, 2011
please work...
Thursday, March 3, 2011
FOUR! FORE!
A LIST!
http://www.scrabble.org.au/words/fours.htm
Tuesday, March 1, 2011
Making Sen(se)tences
Closed in a crowded theater and as the lights are dimmed there is an uneasy, delicate air of discomfort.
The sentence begins too late and too soon all at once. The performance is greatly anticipated, so the ache of wait is too much in the still mist of a desirous audience. The thin veil breaks among the crowd as the curtains crack, and the fear intensifies.
It begins with a stutter, perhaps. A flub. awkward rhythm.
It begins with a need for editing but there is no going back
And the writer must work with the start they are given.
It begins with a nervous audience and a crack in confidence, and continues regardless. It gains motion and poetry. It gains itself. And in this gain, finds meaning and glory among the eyes of the world.
When in a motion of unstoppable delight, the show winds down, the sentence understands itself. A one night show, no flash photography, and the memory of the sentence and it's nuance is the duty the viewer.
And not everybody does his or her job.
So it is lost.
But for that night? The sentence gave a brilliant performance.
H.O., B.R.B., Sumbody is Txting Meh
Why has textual communication become the more prevalent use of phones when they were produced to transmit sound?
In many situations, speaking on the phone is considered impolite. Texting, however, is more accepted. I do not necessarily think it is easier to text as, physically, it requires more work. However, not everyone wants to hear the personal conversations of strangers and the ability to have phones outside of our homes introduces the public to our conversations. Texting is discreet, and generally considered more polite than yelling to be heard on a bus or in a restaurant. Also, in many ways, we are visual creatures. It is easy to see words or pictures in front of us as opposed to having them described. Having a textual record or an image keeps the information stored in a more concrete manner than our own memory.