Mmm more samples!
Sample H
Moving:
1) there is a lot of information
2) I mostly like the statistics in the intro.
3) the look into the herd mentality is clever.
Unmoving:
1) I don't like that the intro makes it seem as though the radio stations are nationwide. The "almost 15,000" statistic does not account for the obvious fact that the reason there are so many is because they are mostly local. It just makes it seem more dramatic than it needs to.
2) there isn't much humanity. To it in the way of what it says about Americans or quotes or anything.
3) why is the conclusion so long??
Signed,
Cassandra Rose Blaise DeMarco
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